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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Jul 23, 2007 13:24:41 GMT -5
Peace, I have found it at last, In the arms of my evergreen love...
The sweet smell of wild flowers and pine needles Intoxicate me further, I feel lost in this lush greenery....
I have found a place among ancient oaks and majestic pines To dream and truly be alive...
Dancing, Weaving a spell of childish enchantment, I feel young and whole once more...
All that i thought i had once lost, Is now found, Hidden here in this ageless glade...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Jul 25, 2007 10:12:13 GMT -5
Work in progress: Angry Girl
To think i use to call you my Best Friend, You're nothing but a back stabbing bitch
You covet what i have, And steal it when my back is turned
Hate does not even begin to describe how i feel about you now, You pissed me off more then words can truly describe...
We use to be inseparable, But now i'm glad that i got away...
You are nothing but a sneaky little thief, Who would steal all the world if you could...
I am free of you, You only trouble me in my sleep When my unconscious mind remembers....
I wish i could just erase you and all your memories, But it just isn't possible...
You are the reason i am Bitter and non trusting, You destroyed the best in me, And believe me when i say i'll do the same to you some day...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Jul 26, 2007 11:37:14 GMT -5
I feel as if i'm nothing, Like i have just disappeared Lost in a limbo of mixed emotions...
I don't know what to say are do, But i guess it's okay, Because eventually we all feel this way...
I fade away into the darkness, Slip away in the dense mist, Into forgotten memories...
I am lost, Yet i wish to be found...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Jul 27, 2007 22:43:45 GMT -5
Edition to You Remain Unforgiven:
Dispair... I am coming for you
Darkness... Is my cover and my unholy mother
Revenge... So bitter sweet and long awaited
Betrayed... By those i held so dear
Trust... Some thing i no longer have
Denied... That which i truly crave
Lost... The best in me
Void... I feel like this every day
Blame... It is all yours.
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Jul 28, 2007 19:07:25 GMT -5
Work in progress: Hang over
I awake... Only to realize my head is throbbing like a beating drum, And i've fallen asleep praying to the porcelain god again...
Oh no... I've defiled his holy throne, I'm in for another lecture...
My mind races And their are blank spots in my last night endeavors I think i drank way to much...
The room is spinning I see spots every where The porcelain god is yelling at me again...
Maybe i shouldn't have had that last drink I feel as if my blood is on fire And my body refuses to move properly
I stager, And stumble Only to end up on the floor...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Jul 31, 2007 12:22:04 GMT -5
Darkness
An ebony shroud that covers us like a child's favorite blanket, Reveals secrets to us in are dreams
The hair of a moonlight Goddess Strewn across worlds...
Her face of perfect silver porcelain Smiling down on everyone as they sleep
Giving, But not taking Making us all remember things untimely forgotten...
She gracefully strides across the darkened sky, Watching and waiting...
Azure sky lite with brite brilliant sanguine sun Banishes darkness and all it's dreams...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Jul 31, 2007 14:26:07 GMT -5
Work in progress:Dark Rose
I am empty, All that flows, Is sanguine blood, From a darkened rose
Thorns pierced my heart long ago Now all that grows, Is one single darkened rose
Opens it's petals up to bleed, For there is nothing it does need, More then tears to sedate it's greed
Blood runs dry, Petals fall, And the rose it withers, And slowly dies...
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i have a disease which no one can define
it invades my body and my mind
painful spasms which i must endure and my mind telling me it's war
i ask myself all the time what did i do to deserve it this time?
so long it's been since my last attack i thought i was free, but now i know i'm off track
nothing i can do but let pain take it's course it can not be subdued, even with force...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Aug 1, 2007 12:34:24 GMT -5
Beautiful face, A lite with autumns sweet glow
Leafs of all colors, Strewn in your hair, Like perfectly placed ornaments to adorn
Royal Red, Golden Yellow, Deep Rustic Brown, All the colors of your autumn crown
The cool breezes blow, And the sun seems to hide, Your beauty is undefined
Regal bearing, All for show, You are kindred to my soul...
When winter comes, To strike you down, No more colors to be found...
Save fore one... Pure White A snowy blanket, A cold and silent tomb, Of endless desolation, Which is are doom...
But soon the sun will shine, The pristine snow will melt, And green things will grow again...
Then you will return, To wear you crown, Endless faces of eternal seasons which i've found...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Aug 1, 2007 21:12:31 GMT -5
I listened to the lyrics in "My Immortal" by Evanescence. It made me cry and remember. The worst time of my life... It made me write this... my raw feelings which i can no longer hide... I loved you more than myself I would have gladly laid down my life for you And I knew you felt the same... But time passes on and we drift apart One man... he stole both are hearts Made us do stupid and hurtful things to each other The wounds are still fresh in my memory You chose him over me... All that i once held dear and true, Died with out a single backward glance from you... Now i'm alone, Stuck out here, With no one left to care... I feel so lost Nothing will ever be as it once was, You stole the best of me, With out having any regrets at all... You just left with out apology, Now all that's left is an empty, numb, nothing, shell of who i use to be....
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Aug 2, 2007 18:45:30 GMT -5
Work in Progress: Inspired by Someone...
The object of my affection, Has become the object, Of my deepest, darkest obsession...
I wish to make you bleed, Sanguine wine wet my lips, Drip down my pale moonlit face...
Twist you, Bend you, Break you down inside...
Make you the same as me, Because in the end, I'll be the last thing that you see...
Cherish this moment of pleasurable pain, Because it will soon drive you insane, Leave you in your ever waking moments to beg for more, And in the end i'll leave you broken and bleeding on the floor...
Everything i touch slowly dies, And i'm left holding nothing, But a memory of your sweet defiant eyes...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Aug 3, 2007 23:23:19 GMT -5
Work in Progress,
I am an emotional being Some say i'm irrational, Maybe that's because i feel to much, And say so very little...
I'm so passive, Maybe i should be more aggressive, Stand my ground even if people think me wrong....
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Aug 4, 2007 11:54:17 GMT -5
Work in Progress: With out Nature
Sun bleached grass, Asphalt river, Running on as far as you can see...
Trees mangeled, And tangeled, Resting on there eves...
Moonlit skin, Kissed red by suns harsh glow, Left to hide beneath, The scattered debrie...
No nature is natural here, It's all man made, Controled and contained...
If ever they break free, They are subdued brutaly...
Shreaded, Broken, Torn, And then discarded like childhood memories...
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Aug 4, 2007 22:35:03 GMT -5
There are a few parts that sound awkward, but im sure you could iron those out easily enough. Try reading this piece out loud. You should be able to hear what im talking about.
*debris
Im liking the idea behind it forsure. Thanks for sharing val.
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Aug 5, 2007 1:12:22 GMT -5
Finished it in 3 word challenge...
Sleep eludes me, Teases me, Taunts me, Haunts me, With her ever present candied lips...
Kisses my tears away, Leaves me empty inside, A hallow vessel, In which dreams reside...
-this was finished in the 3 word challenge
I feel so translucent, When i do sleep Wrapped in eternal paradox, And my true belief...
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Post by ValkyrieGoddess on Aug 5, 2007 15:02:07 GMT -5
Work in Progress: Unnamed Beast
Label me, Define me, It doesn't matter in the end, I'll still be the one that you call Friend...
Defy me, Lie to me, It's Ok because i know the real you, The one hidden beneath the disguise...
Let the World look you in the eyes Only to spit in your face, Now your long lingering hope is replaced...
Burning Hatred, A Plague of Rage, Please don't rattle the beast that sleeps in this cage...
He will shred you, Rend you, Only to remake you, Then take pleasure in re-breaking you...
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