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Post by windfog on Nov 2, 2013 13:56:26 GMT -5
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Post by twistedangel on Nov 3, 2013 2:15:01 GMT -5
the first line gave me a flashback to being in spain this year..one night we had a mother of a lightening storm..wos sooo beautiful if lightening hits the sea then howcome sailors dont get electrocuted ...time to ask me best mates google an wiki nice write Ris
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Post by Aish on Nov 4, 2013 19:07:50 GMT -5
I think you should stick with the first four lines.
Human lightning rods is interesting. I've never seen skeletons with ears before, they cracked me up.
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Post by windfog on Nov 6, 2013 1:31:00 GMT -5
Thank you ladies! Aish. Well, I didn't get what I have to do but, well, you have never seen before such lovely skeletons too! Ha-ha! Just imagination, ignorance, exaggeration, irritation and so on are in this piece. W.F.
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