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Post by windfog on Jun 4, 2013 1:00:44 GMT -5
"Pussy Cat, what's rustling in those bushes?" - "Miracles," dryly answered Cheshire Cat. - "But what they are doing there?" - "They fulfill their duty." - "What kind of duty?" insisted Alice. - "They happen", said C. Cat, and blushed. -
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Post by Aish on Jun 4, 2013 10:28:03 GMT -5
I just adore this, Ris!
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Post by windfog on Jun 4, 2013 16:10:37 GMT -5
Thank you, lady! It was written about 1,5 year ago but only this morning I sent it ... W.F.
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mic2
Crimson Soul
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Post by mic2 on Jun 7, 2013 21:10:53 GMT -5
I like it.
I don't think you need-- "dryly answered Cheshire Cat." as your title says it already and it's used at the end too (3x is a lot, for such a short piece). Consider dropping that. It helps condense it a bit too.
Mic
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Post by twistedangel on Jun 8, 2013 0:48:48 GMT -5
awesome LOL so tyipically you Ris...another write thats totally obviously unobvious <<<very Alice
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jun 20, 2013 10:06:51 GMT -5
Somehow I missed this. One of my all time favorite stories. "But what they are doing there?" LMAO!
You entertain in thoughtful ways my friend and I really appreciate it.
Thanks.
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Post by windfog on Jun 21, 2013 3:08:36 GMT -5
Thank you, friends! W.F.
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jaded
Dark Initiate
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Post by jaded on Jul 6, 2013 4:32:45 GMT -5
Short, sweet, and well funny. Very good
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