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Post by windfog on Mar 5, 2013 3:27:33 GMT -5
A night and a dawn A cloud's quilt divided in tears. A day started to weep "They ripped it up!"
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Post by Aish on Apr 4, 2013 3:35:01 GMT -5
The first there lines are lovely, but I am afraid the last line confuzzles me a bit.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Apr 7, 2013 23:07:07 GMT -5
I agree. L2 and L3 are gold but I can’t see how L1 and L4 are related at all.
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Post by twistedangel on Apr 19, 2013 22:47:42 GMT -5
for me i see the last line as the first thunder clap an the skies 'ripped' apart in the lightening that follows love the imagery this gives
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Post by 6sa6an6 on May 6, 2013 5:56:02 GMT -5
And I love these kinds of days. Cry me a river lord, cry me a river...
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