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Post by Aish on Jul 28, 2012 0:27:05 GMT -5
Drunk on poetic alchemy,
tumbling topsy turvy
I spill
from midnight sun to summer rain.
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mic2
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Post by mic2 on Jul 28, 2012 15:15:18 GMT -5
I'd somehow hook this up with your previous post, make the 2 work together somehow.
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Post by ImpendingDoom on Aug 7, 2012 0:37:21 GMT -5
*Drunk on poetic alchemy* awesomeness! I love that line =)
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Post by Aish on Aug 9, 2012 23:48:35 GMT -5
Thank you both! Mike, I'll work on it
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Post by nibbana on Jun 8, 2014 10:30:09 GMT -5
I think you really were drunk when you penned this It says much for so few words.
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krake
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Post by krake on Jun 8, 2014 13:56:13 GMT -5
It is a glimpse, I think, into the wandering mind of a poet, a true poet whose thoughts are ever focused on the poetic wonder and amazement of all things in life. It is like the surface of deep water, a ripple over the depth below, which causes a pause to ponder that depth; knowing there is no bottom.
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Post by Aish on Jun 10, 2014 12:21:18 GMT -5
It is a glimpse, I think, into the wandering mind of a poet, a true poet whose thoughts are ever focused on the poetic wonder and amazement of all things in life. It is like the surface of deep water, a ripple over the depth below, which causes a pause to ponder that depth; knowing there is no bottom. I'd like to think so, but then not only am I biased I'm also privy to the impetus that spawned this. Thank you so much for the lovely comment. It made my day.
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