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Post by Veritas on Dec 6, 2011 16:37:01 GMT -5
As a spring leaf or a sapling beneath The equatorial sun
...Each moment ripens
... but more so Than fruit
... or children
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Post by Aish on Dec 6, 2011 18:10:07 GMT -5
BEAUTIFUl.
I shan't touch it, for fear it will dissipate on the breeze.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jan 9, 2012 20:10:34 GMT -5
Oh man... The flow on this one...
Its all just so smooth.
Well crafted, Pete. Short and simple but your visuals and topic really deliver.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jan 11, 2012 21:40:12 GMT -5
I love it! It is an excellent expression of a moment I would never have thought to express in this way though I feel you pulled it from my own thoughts. A fresh moment – a new experience. The kind that makes one smile as it unfolds.
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Post by RisYerg on Jan 13, 2012 1:56:42 GMT -5
Hi, sir! You are a hidden romantic! Yes, it's beautiful! R.Y.
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