stev
Dark Initiate
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Post by stev on Mar 24, 2010 19:48:37 GMT -5
(Let me just preface by saying that I wrote this a few years ago when i was still in high school. I was high on cocaine during first period. At the time i was indulging quite frequently. I haven't done the shit in years and i am Not a coke head.
the white line that pierces deep surgical proficiency that seems to take me nowhere am i here? a sordid experience chemical in nature awakening the senses in ways too hard to remember if life wasn't such a blur these lines would mean much more if i could detect the reasons i need them i would believe them wouldn't breath in the dust of these white lines
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Post by Veritas on Jun 7, 2011 10:58:49 GMT -5
That has captured that white powder quite well. I did find it lacking umpf towards the finish, but I recall the preface. I guess I have nothing up my sleeve but a compliment for this piece... I do hope you resurface here again or in the least, continue writing.
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