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Post by drillcapsule on Jan 5, 2004 14:00:35 GMT -5
Ive been drowning for a long time, struggling just to keep afloat, just to keep my head above water, my limbs are cold, heavy and numb, im not sure if they're still moving or they're just pulling me down? all that im sure of is that im still here, but for how long i will never know 'till the time comes
swimming=living if that makes sence
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Post by Burnttonothing on Jan 5, 2004 19:44:01 GMT -5
I like that it's short and sweet and honest. Good showing of numbness. It makes much sense
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