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Post by Forsaken on Jan 1, 2004 22:49:46 GMT -5
Slitting your wrists And breaking your fists Where does it get you? Your body Filled with pain Your brain Going insane Throwing And breaking Falling And shaking Why oh why Do we Try and we try To understand The things that people do? Just let it go Just let it be Unless you know Unless you see The truth behind it all We're crying inside We're dying inside That's why we do it
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CrimsonAngel
Demon Disciple
.Fallen from the broken gates of heaven
Posts: 305
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Post by CrimsonAngel on Jan 2, 2004 0:17:51 GMT -5
I love this one Andy. I is wicked awesome. I'm glad you shared it....
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Post by softspokenlies078 on Jan 2, 2004 1:04:18 GMT -5
definately awesome very powerfully writen
-Jess
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
Posts: 405
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Post by Mistress on Jan 2, 2004 21:59:00 GMT -5
Very well written, Andy. Definately one of your best. Most of it was smooth and powerful. I'd like to see more like this...
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Post by BlackRainbow on Jan 5, 2004 11:07:37 GMT -5
Yea, it's not forced like all of mine
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jan 6, 2004 1:49:57 GMT -5
i agree with mistress.. this is definately one of your better pieces so far.
keep it up.
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