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Jan 1, 2004 13:59:09 GMT -5
Post by drillcapsule on Jan 1, 2004 13:59:09 GMT -5
As you are, as you were, as your expected, as you try to be, as you fail, as you scream, cry, and try again, as you disapoint yourself and those who expect you to be. As the tears wont stop running down your cheek.
As I am, as I was, as i was expected, as I tried to be, as I failed, as I screamed, cried and tried again, as I disapointed myself and those who expected me to be. As the tears wont stop running down our cheeks as we sit here in hell
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CrimsonAngel
Demon Disciple
.Fallen from the broken gates of heaven
Posts: 305
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As is
Jan 1, 2004 14:02:22 GMT -5
Post by CrimsonAngel on Jan 1, 2004 14:02:22 GMT -5
wow....this peice is great....I love it! very nice work!!!
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
Posts: 405
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Jan 1, 2004 14:02:35 GMT -5
Post by Mistress on Jan 1, 2004 14:02:35 GMT -5
Very well written. The emotions behind this are very clear and powerful. I enjoyed it very much.
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