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Post by :.:.:KrO NiC DaZe:.:.: on Jan 1, 2004 2:20:18 GMT -5
" Check List "
Are you happy in your life? Are you living how you like? Do you have an emptiness inside? Do you feel the need to hide? Is there happiness you haven't found? Is it hard to stand your ground? If you had a loving home, Would you still feel all alone? Do you know just how you feel? Have you lost touch with what is real? Do you feel the need to live? Is there a person you wish to forgive? Are you looking to the sky? Do you feel you live a lie? Do you smile when your sad? Do you miss the life you had? Do you feel the need to love? Do you worship the man above? Are you living for the day? Is there words you wish to say? Is there a person you want to be? Is it the light you wish to see? Do you do things because they feel good? Or do you do the things you should? These are the questions I ask everyday I'm hoping for answers to show me the way
edit: had to change the font to a readable colour.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jan 1, 2004 16:48:14 GMT -5
i really like the rhyme scheme and rhythm of this piece.
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Post by softspokenlies078 on Jan 1, 2004 16:50:58 GMT -5
yea that red was pretty bright
last time i read this i didn't comment because my eyes were starting to hurt
but its a very good piece, good job -Jess
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