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Post by Aish on May 12, 2008 18:09:10 GMT -5
Mutiny of varicose celebrity and tangible value/nothingness
of oil whores and celluloid princesses
dancing on the edge of expired dignity.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on May 18, 2008 13:42:41 GMT -5
Im surprised that there are no replies for this piece.
Short, but packs quite the punch. Im liking your word choices, Chrys.
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Post by Kitten on May 23, 2008 22:08:33 GMT -5
[oil whores and celluloid princesses] is right for sure.
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Post by xxxmorbiddreamsxxx on May 25, 2008 23:47:17 GMT -5
of oil whores and celluloid princesses
dancing on the edge of expired dignity.
this kinda reminds me of a porno oil whores and celluloid princesses
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Post by Moonstone Maiden on Jun 3, 2008 19:01:34 GMT -5
*shifts uncomforatbly* I feel like I have personally done something wrong. Scintillating first word... creates the mood before you delve into the poem.
'of varicose celebrity and tangible value/nothingness'
Hello! I've never met two lines with a fading glitter sensation. Awesome.
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wkdclwn
Dark Initiate
Dimension of Imagination
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Post by wkdclwn on Jun 9, 2008 22:14:30 GMT -5
Very eye opening piece for those that can distinguish the words. Very nice and mature piece of work here. I very much enjoyed it.
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Post by cybele on Aug 18, 2008 18:48:28 GMT -5
first trip to this board, having also read "Saturation," I am simply thankful that women like you, Chrysalis, exist. My thanks for sharing.
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