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Post by lostandalone on Dec 12, 2003 17:02:02 GMT -5
i don’t care all my love for you is gone don’t try to come my life is done the pain is just too much
why do you care you weren’t there it was not real love just trying to use me
i am so far away i don’t want you to see me this way broken hearted like you said i would be I’m broken hearted
so don’t say i love you
don’t bother
hey, part 2 of 'never to' its called 'hurt by you'
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Post by lostandalone on Dec 13, 2003 0:02:06 GMT -5
i thank you all for reading my poem all 4 of you
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 13, 2003 0:09:07 GMT -5
Hey, I would have read it earlier if I could! Lol. I've just been swamped by uni work. I missed alot due to my back injury, and they said I'd missed so much they might even keep me back a year! So I had alot of catching up to do. Besides, I'm trying to reply to every poem on the site. And I haven't had much time recently.
Anyway, I like the poem. It was well written and interesting to read. ;D I especially liked the repitition of:
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Post by lostandalone on Dec 13, 2003 0:12:47 GMT -5
lol this was uhhh a this week when i asked a guy to a dance that i really liked and he said no, i came home wrote my feelings on the computer, the next day he said he was sorry and he would like to go to the dance withe me, maybe i should write a part 3
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 13, 2003 0:15:40 GMT -5
Lol. I think a part three would be good. And I always find it interesting to hear what inspired a poem.
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Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 17:36:23 GMT -5
Very emotive and honest. I like it a lot. Many have been through something similiar to what this poem is expressing. I know I sure have...
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