Jetboy
Dark Initiate
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Post by Jetboy on Aug 17, 2005 2:49:42 GMT -5
DIE BITCH today
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Aug 17, 2005 3:08:48 GMT -5
the punctuation you had earlier was more effective. still funny though.
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Post by Reaper696 on Aug 17, 2005 13:54:00 GMT -5
Short, "sweet", and to the point, I like it...
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Post by misty on Aug 19, 2005 6:58:25 GMT -5
a fine play with words and nice experiments with the mental horizon
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Post by Moonstone Maiden on Sept 2, 2005 2:12:49 GMT -5
Ha ha. I hope my ex reads this too. (Maybe then he'ld learn something about treating women).
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lxlxangelicxlxl
Crimson Soul
I have the will to live, Death... be my guide
Posts: 108
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Post by lxlxangelicxlxl on Jul 18, 2006 11:34:53 GMT -5
Very short. Nice. <3 We all feel that way sometime or another.
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Post by vajra on Jul 27, 2006 16:41:35 GMT -5
wow this really is special, i love the way it sucks you in and pushes its emotions on you. The second stanza adds urgency but dosent impose, very effective. Reminds me of yeats.
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Post by shamefulsean on Jul 27, 2006 18:39:34 GMT -5
NICE.....honestly, beautiful.
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Melancholy
Crimson Soul
Beware the sun.... the hellfire of earth. A curse of worlds. Shedding light on our vulnerability
Posts: 178
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Post by Melancholy on Aug 5, 2006 15:02:27 GMT -5
If only I couldforce myself to be that simplistic at times... love it.
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Post by calamityroo on Aug 5, 2006 16:37:54 GMT -5
i really liked this piece. I think it was alittle much with the first stanza, but the second stanza makes up for it. ;D I absoltely love this!!!!! I really wanna say this to my current, but at last he does not call me back... perfect though, says what everyone is thinkning.
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outkastedangel
Dark Initiate
"Dreams are only a fantasy, Nightmares are a part of reality.
Posts: 15
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Post by outkastedangel on Apr 9, 2007 19:23:26 GMT -5
lol this is definitely something i hope no guy ever tells me or thinks about me but i liike it lol. great job!
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Post by Aish on Nov 13, 2007 8:26:54 GMT -5
i ramble and bramble about, and here you've summed it all up just beautifully! This is truly inspiring.
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Post by Rhiannon on Jan 12, 2012 22:02:11 GMT -5
Too funny, and says so much at the same time
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jan 13, 2012 21:00:31 GMT -5
An oldie but a goody. I can only think of one three word phrase that says more. :-)
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Post by Mikepoet on Jan 15, 2012 18:19:08 GMT -5
Well I( have said that before and can understand. What sucks is when they come back and you love em too much not to make love and then it is all over and the bitch came back.
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