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Post by Reaper696 on Jan 28, 2005 19:59:37 GMT -5
This a story of Winky and Pinky, While Winky was long Pinky was damp but not stinky.
They decided to get together one day And spend a night in kinky play, Winky was solid and ready to drool And Pinky was opening her box for her tool.
They felt around and gathered heat And tasted what they thought was sweet, They took their time and moistened the bed When Winky and Pinky went head to head.
Then Winky was ready to dive below And Pinky was ready to go with the flow, Winky stood at Pinky's door And walked right in to feel it more.
Now Pinky was feeling the ocean wave As Winky was being a pendulous slave, Pinky was humming a sweet little tune As her bush and button were making her swoon.
Now Winky decided to pick up the pace And now they're getting red in the face, Pinky was sweating so much that she dripped And Winky's two little friends tightened their grip.
They shook their way toward mutual bliss With Winky stroking Pinky's abyss. Pinky then flooded then yapped like a pup Winky got a migraine,and promptly threw up.
Winky and Pinky were thoroughly spent As their party came and went, They basked in their created slime And each hoped there will be next time...
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Post by Aish on Jan 31, 2005 16:37:13 GMT -5
Hahahahahaha
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Post by Kitten on Jan 31, 2005 18:02:18 GMT -5
Are ya gonna read this to yer kids? Ya kinda f*cked up the rhythm in the last stanza.
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Post by Reaper696 on Jan 31, 2005 19:00:58 GMT -5
Chrys, : : . Kitten, not a damn chance in the world. The rhythm is there, it's just the 1-count at the end is on "each and not "and". Thanks for reading this y'all...
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Post by Kitten on Jan 31, 2005 21:30:38 GMT -5
Nah man, yer syllable count is still off. But s'ok. I'm not picking, just pointing out.
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Post by Reaper696 on Jan 31, 2005 21:38:50 GMT -5
The meter here is not in the syllables, it's best graphed with a metronome instead (I get bored with "conventional")...
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Post by Kitten on Jan 31, 2005 21:41:37 GMT -5
Hey Reaper! How about less pointless chitchat and more feedback to others eh?! (saying that here coz shoutbox is f*ckin up)
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 1, 2005 12:21:30 GMT -5
Hey Reaper! How about less pointless chitchat and more feedback to others eh?! (saying that here coz shoutbox is f*ckin up) Eyes that do behold, Will always have opinion. Isn't it their choice?...
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Post by Yossarian on Feb 3, 2005 16:43:15 GMT -5
wow....speechless, reaper.
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 3, 2005 16:56:07 GMT -5
When the mind is bored, Inspiration finds new routes. Ain't that how it goes?...
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queenie
Demon Disciple
Timor mortis conturbat me.
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Post by queenie on Feb 6, 2005 10:05:10 GMT -5
What can I say I like Dr Suess parodies and this was very deftly done. Laughed my lily white arse off.
Q
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 6, 2005 17:34:35 GMT -5
Seuss is such an easy target. Thanks foir reading this...
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littlewhipmaker
Demon Disciple
Who understands pleasure, without a little pain...
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Post by littlewhipmaker on Feb 14, 2005 11:53:48 GMT -5
OMG...i am both disturbed and amused...great great write! Poor Seuss would roll in his grave.
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Post by Reaper696 on Feb 14, 2005 19:25:06 GMT -5
That's the point, if no one's pissed at it, you didn't do it right. Thanks for reading this...
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Post by DarkCloud on Feb 24, 2005 10:58:59 GMT -5
what can I say except to laugh. hehehehehehehehehehe......
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