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Post by Lina Inverse on Nov 23, 2003 21:35:40 GMT -5
Why does everything always happen to me? My best friend is dying And there's nothing I can do about it. So here I am Crying, Suffering.
I'm so f*cking selfish. Nothing's happening to me. I don't have a giant tumor in my brain I don't have to spend my days in a hospital bed Dying, Suffering.
Why does everything always happen to you? My best friend is dying And there's nothing I can do about it. But here I am Trying, Suffering.
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AxXis
Crimson Soul
I know the pale thing in the darkest of places.
Posts: 218
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Post by AxXis on Nov 24, 2003 23:24:22 GMT -5
I had to read it twice. It's so subtle but powerful at the same time. Sometimes I wish I could reach way down like that, and sometimes.......
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Nov 25, 2003 13:38:14 GMT -5
that is something terrible for your friend and everyone involved to experience..
.. i feel for you..
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Post by Lina Inverse on Nov 25, 2003 21:12:07 GMT -5
Don't worry, guys! It's a hypothetical situation ^_^
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Nov 26, 2003 0:24:22 GMT -5
oh good. i was hoping for that. well.. you obviously did a good job if you convinced the two of us
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 9, 2003 8:52:07 GMT -5
You write very convincingly! Lol. I was convinced it was real too! Lukcy I read the other comments before I commented, wasn't it? Very well written.
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
Posts: 405
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Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 20:43:22 GMT -5
Very convincing. One would think that you're actually losing or have lost from reading your writing. It's not bad at all...
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