steinbergm
Dark Initiate
i dont bite....hard
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Post by steinbergm on Feb 1, 2008 22:45:07 GMT -5
kill my head. make me dead. rotting flesh torn out wide. poke and prod with your metal rod. see if i wither away. i am laid out for you to see. A curtain of blood dripping into the sea. numb dumb bomb. blow it close it kill. disease my perfected will. nullify my thoughts....make them stop. delusions are becoming real. dried up tongue, shriveled ...inside my blue beaten lips. your eyes are blackened in your brain. they are burnt and engraved. memories never fade. dope it away..not being able to stay. gone again today. separate---disassociate. strengthen the walls. keep me prisoner. underneath this, dirt ... buried ... prison ...
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steinbergm
Dark Initiate
i dont bite....hard
Posts: 64
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Post by steinbergm on Feb 3, 2008 12:52:18 GMT -5
i just realized that i posted this poem on the wrong board.. sorry
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Post by Aish on Feb 8, 2008 7:16:06 GMT -5
You have an inexplicable amount of typos in here. Although I understand this is stream of consciousness, it could still be cleaned up a bit.
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steinbergm
Dark Initiate
i dont bite....hard
Posts: 64
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Post by steinbergm on Feb 9, 2008 15:29:08 GMT -5
is this looking better ..? have any more comments or advise for me? thanks . malissa
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Post by acronymph on Feb 9, 2008 19:04:27 GMT -5
I have no idea what this is about
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