CrimsonAngel
Demon Disciple
.Fallen from the broken gates of heaven
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Post by CrimsonAngel on Nov 11, 2003 13:21:16 GMT -5
Here I am, suppresed by hate Watch me bleed and suffocate I could say it, but you already know The only things is, I can't show Show the me thats hidden in a haze These endless days, I'm amazed That I can keep taking this breath While trying to escape my bloody death Please don't let go of my trembling hand On my own, I can't stand If your grip loosens, I'll slip and fall If you let go, I'll give up on it all
~Note~This poem is about a friend of mine who is always there for me, and sometimes I'm afraid he will let go and give on me...
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Nov 11, 2003 14:46:32 GMT -5
i can relate.
well done, angel. you get your desperation(for lack of a better word) across well. keep it up.
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Post by Saxon shadow on Nov 15, 2003 20:17:47 GMT -5
A very honest write my friend, I like that, a slice of your life as it were, I think we all need a special friend, you are most fortunate to have one, BG
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 4, 2003 9:12:31 GMT -5
A very true depiction. And it's lovely that you have someone who has obviously means so much to you and has helped you. I wish I had that.
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 21:16:12 GMT -5
Very truthfully emotive. I enjoyed reading it and I can definately relate to it...
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