DarkenTheSky
Demon Disciple
Beneath the Watery Lust Garden, my Secret Lies. . .
Posts: 392
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Go Away
Nov 10, 2003 5:31:34 GMT -5
Post by DarkenTheSky on Nov 10, 2003 5:31:34 GMT -5
Get the Hell out of here! Go and don't come back. I know you want to go away, It doesn't matter that I'm here today, It's not fair to you to make you stay, You'll be leaving anyway.
Why not sooner then later? The end result will be the same, You won't be mine anymore to claim. I'll walk the nights alone again, And like before, I'll have one less friend,
I could lie and hide my head, And pretend that I don't care. But secretly I'm hoping That you won't go anywhere.
Because I'm so F***ing selfish, And I'm so F***ing worthless, And I'm so F***ing helpless, And I'm not even sure this is real.
But I think when you're gone, I'll miss you, Life won't be worth living, again anymore. I'll be bored, and nothing will change, Monotonous all over again, It's never going to end,
And you can't help, Because you're smart and made it out,
And you're gone.
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Go Away
Dec 3, 2003 15:37:02 GMT -5
Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 3, 2003 15:37:02 GMT -5
The first two lines reminded me of Gollum out of LOTR!!! You know the scene where he's talking to himself? Lol. Sorry, just had to tell you that. I think Golum is someone I can relate to, though. In him I see something very familiar.
I think the line "Life won't be living again, anymore" is a little confused, but the rest was very good. I especially loved the line "Because you're smart and made it out".
This whole poem sounds exactly like how I'm feeling at the moment. It's so sad. Yet so true.
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
Posts: 405
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Go Away
Dec 22, 2003 21:31:13 GMT -5
Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 21:31:13 GMT -5
Sad, but true. There's nothing else to say about it...
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