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Post by black jewelled rain on Oct 24, 2003 21:15:59 GMT -5
I know, but I don’t. I'm here, but I’m there. I can, but I won’t. I'm strong, but I’m scared.
It’s day, but it’s night. It’s life, but it’s death. It’s wrong, but it’s right. It gives life, but takes breath.
It’s nothing but a knife. I’m happy, but I cry. Gives and takes life. Tear stained cheeks are dry.
Right way up, upside down. Feelings shown but hidden. I smile sadly as I frown. An act done but forbidden.
Confused yet? This is ten seconds in my head.
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CrimsonAngel
Demon Disciple
.Fallen from the broken gates of heaven
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Post by CrimsonAngel on Oct 26, 2003 17:34:52 GMT -5
I can totally relate to this poem, every ten seconds in my head I think those exact same thoughts.....I love it a lot!
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 21:46:46 GMT -5
This piece has a nice flow to it. I can also relate to this in many ways. Very nicely done, Sheona!
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 22, 2003 22:12:36 GMT -5
Thanks. I'm actually getting this poem published, so I'm quite proud of it!
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 22:23:35 GMT -5
That always make you feel accomplished and good about your work when someone admires it enough to publish it. Congrats!
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 22, 2003 23:57:56 GMT -5
Thanks. *blushes*
I was really flattered that they wanted 2 to publish it.
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 24, 2003 15:36:42 GMT -5
Well, you do very good work and I love your work, so who else wouldn't? I'm very picky about what I like sort of like a critic, so it's definately good...
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 24, 2003 21:31:08 GMT -5
Well that means alot to me. Thanks everyone. ;D
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