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Post by Time_Spinner on Aug 22, 2006 21:30:15 GMT -5
Whispered dewdrops singing on leaves dancing among cataclysmic divinity a single hope drowning in starlight the purity of sacrificed sin.
A moonlit feline, my ultimate delight?
On the sacred prowl of crystalline eyes such orbs of corrupt serenity lazily dreaming, a simple rest awakened a door to the finality of seeing.
A promised truth the truthful lie passionate broken hue of a life forgiven to die.
Choosing the words to save the night forsaken of blessings in Hellish goodbye confusion, retribution lost and confined to all sort of secrets that Death chose to hide.
Desirable innocence, tainted but blessed gently and quick, a final embrace to define Her Damned duality angelic, demonic, Angeline, Dominion Her true nature shows what we all have in common.
Twisted and skewered, emotions on a stick roasting and deformed one final lick a blinded hindsight, a lie that we all revel to live in.
Illusioned trust, distrust our purity layered and layered among corpses not at all morbid, a reality lined in fantasy if none hear Her words,
we need not ignore
torn upon so many vines of blackened iron-wrought thorn bled, eternal rest a darkened star of shadowed bliss.
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Post by shamefulsean on Aug 29, 2006 15:24:35 GMT -5
o man, very freaking articulate piece for someone lost in a dizzyspell of drugs or alcohol. i love this piece tho. the first and third stanza were pristine acts brilliance!
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Post by Time_Spinner on Aug 29, 2006 16:54:22 GMT -5
i was actually very nervous about submitting this piece, becuz i wasn't sure what kind of poems went into inebriations, so i kinda skimmed over others poems, and so i had a general idea. i focused on my ideas of spirituality and duality, and this piece was spawned. gladja liked...were you sober when you read this?
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