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Post by black jewelled rain on Oct 5, 2003 8:47:25 GMT -5
Sometimes the lessons of life, Can be so very hard. They leave you feeling tired and weary, And forever emotionally scarred. He was always smiling and laughing, He always had a new joke to tell, And now we have to be the narrator, Because we his tragic story shall tell: After a cold and brutal attack, He came to his short life’s end, Because of a simple metal blade, We've lost a treasured friend. I don’t think any of us left, Will ever be able to see Why his life was taken, Why this has to be. We will never be able to forget, We will miss him very much. We were all blessed by his presence, We were all moved by his tender touch. Even in the saddest of moments, Without even thinking how, He could always bring a smile, And I hope he’s smiling now. So I hope this message touches you, And his death hasn't been in vain, Because I'd hate anybody else, To have to go through all this again. Never carry a weapon with you Keep this always in mind, Because the very real tragedy, Is what happens to those that get left behind.
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Post by xxslavexbugxx on Oct 24, 2003 11:05:37 GMT -5
I really like this poem, becuase i lost a friend, who always made everyone's mood better, becuase of a gun. Thanks.
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DarkMuseSick
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Post by DarkMuseSick on Oct 24, 2003 14:46:45 GMT -5
wow. Thats a nice poem. Its very touching.
However, I am one who always carries a small knife with me. I have a life that allows me to survive no other way, but I wish I didnt need it.
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Post by black jewelled rain on Oct 24, 2003 21:15:15 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but you shoud NEVER carry a knife, no matter what. If you carry it, then you intend to use it. If the intention wasn't there, you wouldn't carry it. My friend was murdered because someone carried a knife and thought they's never use it. They tried to mug him. When he fought back, they brought out their knife. After stabbing him, they left him bleeding to death. It took two hours for that to happen. Two hours of lonely deathly pain. There's no excuse for carrying a knife.
This poem is to show what happens when you do.
xxSlavexBugxx, I'm sorry to hear you've experienced something similar. No one should have to. No one.
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Mistress
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Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 22:15:42 GMT -5
Very painfully true. Bad things happen to some of the best people. It's actually quite sad. Very well written poem. Very touching...
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 22, 2003 23:37:41 GMT -5
Thankyou. I just hope people learn from it.
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CrimsonAngel
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Post by CrimsonAngel on Dec 23, 2003 22:40:30 GMT -5
this poem is so well written....I really like it, I can realte to it....nice job!!!
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 23, 2003 23:15:44 GMT -5
Thanks, BloodyAngelTears. That means alot to me.
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Post by lostandalone on Dec 24, 2003 0:04:37 GMT -5
*eyes glase over, and looks down* it touched me, very sad *closes eyes*
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