EbonyKiss
Dark Initiate
.:Beautifully Twisted:.
Posts: 54
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Post by EbonyKiss on Jun 24, 2005 14:35:20 GMT -5
NOTE: Wrote this today. I came across the word 'intoxicate' somewhere and before I could stop myself I had notepad open and was typing...
Intoxicated Intoxicating; madness... Rivers flow backwards in the mind of the believing and believe I do As the day repeats itself whilst my hands smooth over your hot flesh asking, pleading taking... Firefly's hum in the darkness between the shadows of the returning dawn Your kiss, everlasting; your embrace Eternal as time starts over and I hang onto what is beginning again.
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Post by x__powerABUSE on Jun 24, 2005 19:41:20 GMT -5
wow. I liked this alot.
[Your kiss, everlasting; your embrace Eternal as time starts over and I hang onto what is beginning again.]
Awesome! Good work hun.
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Post by Aish on Jun 26, 2005 22:15:02 GMT -5
This is beautiful, a lambent flame...
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Post by DarkCloud on Jun 29, 2005 17:15:28 GMT -5
Greetings!
theres a rough flow then smooth then rough... good work.
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Post by misty on Jul 8, 2005 8:55:38 GMT -5
this is amazing...i can smell the emotion behind it. wonderfully done. your words here were poignant and sharp. very deep expression of the agonized heart. extremely novel write.
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