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Post by Aish on Jun 16, 2005 4:37:05 GMT -5
In a pouty mood - wanting you here, between my thighs... met with nothing but the warm arms of the night... siren song, I send my lust out, into the coming dawn - the downy softness waiting... to overtake you as you slumberkiss my dreams. Ravaged, revenant released and held, primal thunder in your bones... tangling, on the astral plane... sexdrenched souls atoned...
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Post by x__powerABUSE on Jun 16, 2005 4:46:34 GMT -5
Oww! HOTT! That gave me chills!
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jun 16, 2005 13:21:35 GMT -5
holy f*ck.
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Post by darkunknown2 on Jun 18, 2005 3:07:51 GMT -5
can't talk have to keep reading
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Post by Aish on Jun 18, 2005 3:52:02 GMT -5
;D Head like a hole, black as you r soul... ;D
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Post by DarkCloud on Jun 22, 2005 21:03:06 GMT -5
Greetings!
got me turned on! hehhehehe.... ;D
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Post by Moonstone Maiden on Jun 24, 2005 3:37:03 GMT -5
Sweetly mystifying. I liked the emotions. Described my feelings for a certain someone to a 'T'! Lovin' it.
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Post by jyrascarn on Jun 25, 2005 4:07:24 GMT -5
I think I'm going to jack off among the stars and impregnate the stellar abode with the heavenly gift of your revenant rekindling!
Certainly grows on you ...
Lovely.
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Post by Aish on Jun 26, 2005 22:14:17 GMT -5
Jyra! Hey!
Thanks for the great replies, everyone! Am happy it moved you all as much (almost) as it moved me. :-)
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queenie
Demon Disciple
Timor mortis conturbat me.
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Post by queenie on Jul 2, 2005 20:06:10 GMT -5
Hey up Jyra.
Sorry Chrys but I hadn't seen him in ages.
No actually i'm not sorry for hi-jacking your thread to shout ello's. I home alone and your poem has made he ... er come over all perculiar with no mr q in sight. I hope your ashamed of yourself you brazen hussy.
BTW your developing an obsession with the word downy...which used to make me think of geese innocent lil goslings and now you've sullied it.
Q
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Post by misty on Jul 4, 2005 4:41:53 GMT -5
Truly exquisite! wow, there's a lot happening here. great work, really stimulating.
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Post by Crucifying_Aphrodite on Jul 6, 2005 2:04:27 GMT -5
*silence* two words chrys.. --Absolutely Ravishing--
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Post by MirrorImage || egamIrorriM on Jul 6, 2005 21:29:09 GMT -5
wow. i may not have the deep insights to poetry everyone else here does, but that was deep. really struck a chord in me.
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Post by Aish on Jul 7, 2005 15:24:18 GMT -5
Wow - my thanks to you all for welcoming this so warmly!
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