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Post by black jewelled rain on Oct 3, 2003 15:37:30 GMT -5
Why do some journeys start? Why do some journeys have to end? You weren't just anyone, You were a very dear friend. My last words to you, Were the same as yours back to me, I can’t help feeling that it was Never meant to be. I can't describe the pain, The pain that is deep inside, I can’t imagine your pain and anguish, No matter how I tried. All those you left behind With whom you had a special bond, Will always feel the hurt, And can’t help feeling wronged. And now your eternal soul Has drifted too far from shore. And we wish we’d done something different, That we’d thought of this before. They didn’t know of your value They don’t care that you’re gone. They’ll never know of your kindness How your spirit brightly shone. None of us will ever forget That cold and violent attack, Now you’re walking away from us And there’s no turning back. You are now free of your pain, It’s still here for those left behind. We’re left with the agony of loving you, And some hope we cannot find. Maybe we will one day Learn what life is for. Until that day we can only say We will love you evermore.
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Oct 4, 2003 14:57:16 GMT -5
a very touching piece.
thanks for sharing your work.
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 22, 2003 23:07:58 GMT -5
This is piece is amazing. The emotions throughout it are very touching. A great write...
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 23, 2003 0:26:04 GMT -5
Thanks. This was written at the time my friend was murdered this year. I wrote quite a few poems for him. I wrote one to be read out at the funeral service. I might post that one in the future. Who knows.
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CrimsonAngel
Demon Disciple
.Fallen from the broken gates of heaven
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Post by CrimsonAngel on Dec 23, 2003 21:31:32 GMT -5
this piece is really good....I can really relate to it, i had a friend die in a car crash, and the last thing I told him was 'I hope you die'.....This one really brings back some memories....nice work!
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Post by black jewelled rain on Dec 23, 2003 21:53:53 GMT -5
I'm so sorry to hear that. You must have gone through alot after that happened. I'm sorry if I brought back any bad memories.
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Post by lostandalone on Dec 24, 2003 0:10:42 GMT -5
sad yet butiful at the same time, great job on the many emotions flowing from this poem
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