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Post by carpenoctern on Dec 6, 2004 16:53:25 GMT -5
as those in the light pretain to shadow collosal darkness within erodes the eternal faith that resides close to hearts chest like meadow artists paint trickles blood from bloods waif the fruit of a trailing vines complexion sallow hark doth we now for an auras angel to be safe yet knowledge denies the righteous to be hallow and the power of holy determination designs to chafe crystalline petals of flora demand to be presented a sheen to lie betwix the curtain's drape wilted roses of forlorn demeanour augmented to cross a barrier of shadow formed at the nape the friend of all yet none falls to design awaiting his enemy to stab a knife in a heart benign
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Post by Yossarian on Dec 25, 2004 18:25:06 GMT -5
*falls over from shock* first stanza?! :shockedface: umm...I'll have to think about this one......
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Post by Moonstone Maiden on Jan 28, 2005 0:52:02 GMT -5
*falls over from shock* first stanza?! umm...I'll have to think about this one...... Ditto.
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Post by carpenoctern on Jan 28, 2005 12:15:44 GMT -5
okay, i don't know what i was thinking when i wrote this. now that i look at it, i can see that it could almost stand as an entire poem
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Post by Moonstone Maiden on Jan 31, 2005 2:36:15 GMT -5
okay, i don't know what i was thinking when i wrote this. now that i look at it, i can see that it could almost stand as an entire poem Yah. Maybe you should get it moved somewhere, Nature prehaps?
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