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Post by Yossarian on Nov 23, 2004 19:00:40 GMT -5
"Falling fast I face the past Smash, crash I’m gone like that, China doll is no more You wont forget me anymore." Although I thought this was the best part of the song, for some reason, your wording seemed awkard. This was well written, but flat, cold, and emotionless (maybe that's the point...). So, unfortunately, it didn't do anything for me. Sorry...
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Post by shadowsangel on Nov 24, 2004 13:55:45 GMT -5
no no its alright it was sopose to be like that im glad you like this peice took me a while to write it
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