Moonlitface
Crimson Soul
"I went through Hell to be redeemed..."
Posts: 264
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Post by Moonlitface on Nov 21, 2004 15:11:21 GMT -5
cool :winkface: Odd but cool
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Post by shadowsangel on Nov 21, 2004 15:29:49 GMT -5
thank you very much i know its a bit odd but still its one of my very first songs
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Post by Yossarian on Nov 22, 2004 7:18:21 GMT -5
I reach out to the sky screaming Elphame What's Elphame? This was well-written, but it didn't do anything for me--in fact, I thought it was a bit dull. It seemed like some of the other poems you've posted on here... Regardless, the chorus sent shivers up my spine.
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Post by shadows angel on Nov 22, 2004 13:46:25 GMT -5
thanks you its weird i know its old as well my new work is much better
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