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Idiot
Oct 21, 2004 16:43:31 GMT -5
Post by Yossarian on Oct 21, 2004 16:43:31 GMT -5
You could say I have a fear of confrontation That I'm naive, and that I can't cope The psychyactrists say I need a vacation That I'm losing faith, I'm losing hope
You claim I have a fear of confrontation That I don't say what I'd really like to do I may be crazy and taking medication But what's right for me, may not be right for you.
[Chorus] We're all just idiots Taking a leap, Doing the dance We're all just idiots Leaping the gap Taking a chance.
You claim I have a fear of doing what's right Asking "Why is you just don't see? You're doing it all wrong, not doing it my way" Well, what's right for you may not be right for me.
[Chorus]
Don't want to have to deal with these idiots any more... Don't want to have to deal with these idiots any more...
Suggestions are extremely welcome.
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Idiot
Oct 22, 2004 21:44:32 GMT -5
Post by _black phoenix_ on Oct 22, 2004 21:44:32 GMT -5
wicked stuff, yoss! i really liked that particular stanza. ;D theres a typo in there. i think this stanza may be more effective if you were to take out the repetition of "leap/leaping." try replacing one with a similar word. nice work! thanks for sharing it with us.
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Idiot
Nov 10, 2004 21:40:12 GMT -5
Post by Moonstone Maiden on Nov 10, 2004 21:40:12 GMT -5
Hmm, I agree.
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