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Post by :.:.:KrO NiC DaZe:.:.: on Jul 15, 2004 19:21:33 GMT -5
:::I turned a poem I wrote into a song because I thought it seemed more like a song anyways, so if it looks familiar thats why:::
"Break Down"
Verse One:
He's breaking down inside He's crying on the floor She's done it once again And he can't take it no more He doesn't know what to do He doesn't know what to say He wishes he could erase the past And she would go away To her it was a game Now he don't wanna play He'll put it to an end He'll do it here today
Chorus:
He's breaking down He can't take it no more He's breaking down He can't be with a whore
He's breaking down He can't take it no more He's breaking down He can't be with a whore
Verse Two:
He'll be ready When she walks through the door He'll make her feel his pain For being such a whore...
(8 second pause)
The knife is shaking in his hand When she walks through the door Prepared for whats to come He's ready to settle the score
Chorus:
He's breaking down He can't take it no more He's breaking down He can't be with a whore
He's breaking down He can't take it no more He's breaking down He can't be with a whore
Verse Three:
Familiar faces make there way To the blood drenched display He stood over her in dismay Not a word was left to say
(To see them running scared Just showed that no one cared)
With his face filled with shame He looked out from within the frame One face remained the same Of a girl who held no name Here to save him from his doom Hand in hand they'd walk through gloom Through the storm true love gave bloom Now his life he could resume
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Post by fury on Jul 15, 2004 19:24:54 GMT -5
good write....interesting topic. thanks for sharing with us!
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 15, 2004 21:33:23 GMT -5
that should be "their" i wish i could listen to this with music..
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Post by :.:.:KrO NiC DaZe:.:.: on Jul 15, 2004 21:39:38 GMT -5
lol I know....I don't feel like changing it though....a band I know is going ta make this into a song...when they do I'll put it up on soundclick.com
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