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Post by fury on Jul 6, 2004 20:02:58 GMT -5
If I could die to ease your pain I’d suffer through a thousand times, And if it’d help to heal your heart, I’d gladly trade and give you mine
If I would drown in salty tears, Would you my friend not cry? And if I gave you all my truth, Would I have washed away their lies?
If I traded you my wisdom friend, What would you trade to me? I think I’d want to take your hurt, So that you’d, my friend, be free
If I could right the wrongs of time, Would all your life be well? And if I gave you all my grace – Could I spare you from this hell?
If I could be all that you need, Then things might not be rough, But I am just someone who cares, And I hope that that’s enough….
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Jul 7, 2004 11:33:11 GMT -5
aww this is so sweet. i love this piece.. its just so wonderful. very idealistic.
sorry my feedback wasnt all that constructive.. i just woke up!
welcome to dark star, silverstreams ;D
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Post by :.:.:KrO NiC DaZe:.:.: on Jul 15, 2004 19:30:24 GMT -5
WoW!!! That was f*ckin awesome! I know a GREAT band that could put music to that for you if you wanted....they're f*ckin awesome if you like their kind of music....they're a mix between Staind and Nirvana...anyways....the song was awesome but I think you should make it a little longer so you could add a chorus to it....just a suggestion....thanx for sharing that with us!
Later, Daze
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