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Post by calamityroo on Jun 26, 2004 22:49:56 GMT -5
Can't you hear them? Coming up the stairs, They were watching us. Why can't you run away? Why can't you walk away? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? Cant you feel me hug your body? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? Cant you feel my heart beating close to yours? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? Cant you feel my hand in yours? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? I hear you calling me I try to yell back All that comes out is a rasp Why can't you hear me? Why can't you call back? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? Cant you feel me hug your body? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? Cant you feel my heart beating close to yours? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? Cant you feel my hand in yours? Cant you feel anything? Cant you feel me? Note~~~~~ I dont know if this is too good. This is my first song. In my band everyone else writes the songs that we do, so i decided to give it a try.
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Post by calamityroo on Jun 30, 2004 18:05:49 GMT -5
Ok... Thanks for the responses guys!!! That answers my question if this was good or not. It obviously not. Thank you.
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Post by LORDMORNINGSTAR on Jun 30, 2004 18:11:13 GMT -5
Its repetitious, that much its got going for it, I trip on lyrics, mostly because I need to hear the music to get the right idea, the first part doesn't seem to fit with the rest and at the same time its the most capptivating........ I wanna hear it!
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Post by calamityroo on Jul 1, 2004 22:07:01 GMT -5
Haha... give me your email and I might be able to get you a copy of it from my keyboard. Of course, you would have to deal with me singing. **runs and gives ear plugs**
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