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Post by jyrascarn on Oct 21, 2003 5:18:38 GMT -5
The day you came to me The night your company The stars shone in your eyes Black holes that filled the skies
The object of desire A dazzling ball of fire Obscured now by the clouds Suspended in a misty shroud
My spider girl From Galaxy 4 My spider girl ...
You didn't knock at my door But knocked me straight to the floor One look was all that it took And I was yours forever more
The implantation it burns Stigma of one who still yearns You bent me to your wild will And then you moved in for the kill
My spider girl From Galaxy 4 My spider girl ...
And so I sold the world Which into hell I hurled And the secrets I betrayed For which the price has been paid
And now I'm grovelling here, so lost and alone Feel the venom of your bite infect every bone You raped my body, you raped my mind You blinded me with your spider love so sublime And the nuclear winter you left in your wake Settles in this crater in which I cry for your sake So, I'm waiting now for you to return And in the meantime I burn ...
When distant worlds collide And the dimensions coincide I catch a glimpse of you Before you disappear from my view
Your spider's web in my head Has made me rise from the dead Your sweet arachnid appeal Makes me forget the raw deal
My spider girl From Galaxy 4 My spider girl ...
And so I watch the skies Trapped in your web of lies But who am I to care My dream forever mankind's nightmare
And while I await your return The skies so black while I burn Even though you're light-years from here Your poison fangs I revere
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Oct 28, 2003 14:10:19 GMT -5
i read this one before, but i guess i must have been in a different mindset.. i couldnt pass up on leaving a reply this time!
there were a few really wicked parts in these lyrics..
"you bent me to your wild will and then you moved in for the kill."
"and now im grovelling here, so lost and alone feel the venom of your bite infect every bone you raped my body, you raped my mind you blinded me with your spider love so sublime."
"so, im waiting now for you to return and in the meantime i burn ..."
"and so i watch the skies trapped in your web of lies but who am i to care my dream forever mankind's nightmare."
i love the ideas in this. you really get whole concept of being used and still having a need for the abuser across well.
congrats on a piece well done.
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Post by jyrascarn on Oct 29, 2003 6:22:30 GMT -5
That's right. This is an old one (good memory!) and has been posted before. Hope you don't mind, but i simply couldn't resist ... As no one was interested in commenting on it the first time round, I decided to give it another go ... and hey, it worked! So, thank you for reading it again ... and glad you enjoyed it! ________________
PS: There are two other pieces that have already seen the light of day, and which I'd like to give a second chance, so don't be surprised if they somehow turn up on your site one of these dark days!
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Mistress
Demon Disciple
Eternally Damned
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Post by Mistress on Dec 16, 2003 18:54:48 GMT -5
This is one the of most unique set of lyrics and ideas I've come across recently! Your mind is quite creative and outset...
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Post by jyrascarn on Dec 17, 2003 10:06:27 GMT -5
I'm flattered ...
Thank you very much for your generous comments, Mistress.
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