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Post by Describe on Jul 31, 2003 17:13:33 GMT -5
Two groups of us set forth in three's. We had agreed to meet back here at five. My three forethought to take the first path, four other three's paired off in sixes. . The fourth in our group said, "just a second", so we three sat as one and took a five'er. One said, "hey look at that...a three winged bird"; the second it took to turn, was one second too long . "Three winged birds have only one foot," panted four. Said three, (that's me) "my watch says five to six" at that we six turned at once and then broke into three's. Five after six...oh my, how time fly's like a three winged bird
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Post by _black phoenix_ on Aug 2, 2003 1:47:05 GMT -5
really interesting. im a little tired and i think i may have missed a bit of it.. ill read this again in the morning.
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Post by black jewelled rain on Oct 14, 2003 6:21:00 GMT -5
What an interesting and philosophical poem. It was perhaps a little confusing at times, but I love the idea that you're trying to put across. It was the last line that I liked the most: 'how time fly's like a three winged bird'. A very interesting thought!
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