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Post by zimcat on Jul 5, 2017 15:16:32 GMT -5
Whispers to a dissension brain, and old warning's flare summoned to the air by mainstream thrills foremost anguish the silence for their demise A brain sterile and a face flying against me the pain of a ghost forever old. little short I know
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Post by twistedangel on Jul 6, 2017 18:05:29 GMT -5
First peace I read from you....me first thoughts on this are of maybe frustration but on rereading it I think there's more going on...is definitely a intriguing write IMO tho it could do with breaking down a little into shorter lines, just to make it more aesthetically pleasing to the eye Nothing wrong with short lol
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Post by zimcat on Jul 6, 2017 19:28:41 GMT -5
thank you
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