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Post by LonelyForsaken on May 30, 2016 22:57:42 GMT -5
I like your word choices a lot. You lost me towards the end because it gets hard to connect everything but its good anyway. I mean I'm not sure what exactly is so below your contempt but I love that ending. S2 could stand alone. I like that part a lot too:)
Thanks for sharing.
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Post by twistedangel on May 31, 2016 6:29:59 GMT -5
Am thinking the green fairey is jelously...ermm am I gonna regret asking about the white tissue lol I have the same probs as LF connecting the last stanza into the hole..but deffo enjoyed the read an how it provokes thought
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