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Post by twistedangel on Oct 27, 2015 5:12:06 GMT -5
Nightshades kiss eternal slumbers blossom
Circles circumference complete fear not shadowlands
In Gaia's arms all are remembered let not salt tears taint their bed
New life, new hope a myriad of colour blaze
Flowers spring forth upon the lichfield
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Oct 27, 2015 14:12:09 GMT -5
S3 - I think you mean Gaia (Greek goddess of Earth) not Gaya. "Nightshades kiss" makes a very nice opening statement for this as it is open to interpretation, everything from a cure to suicide, but most commonly poison. However, "eternal slumbers blossom" leans it heavily towards suicide. I'm not sure that was your intention as this seems to lean towards the Ouroboros but I like your word choices in this one a lot. It's thought provoking and I love the image of flowers on the killing field.
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