krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Oct 13, 2015 19:19:53 GMT -5
I feel you inside of me, Looking around for a place to be what you want to be, inside of me. I'm gonna reach down, right down my throat Grab you buy the face and rip you out. Throw you on the ground and stomp you in the dirt, like the worm you are.
You were a speck, a dark seed of hate, planted by those that bullied me. I did not feel you there at first, I found you when I lost myself waiting to quench my burning thirst, for peace within. You said: "follow," and when I did, you set me free.
You and I, became the same You and I, increased my pain You and I, drove me insane
I sat you down and chained you up, and found the me that I missed so much. I walked away from the name we made, and tossed the rules to the game we played. I stepped away from the dark of night; Took the high road and made things right, then found a way to love this life.
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Post by Veritas on Oct 14, 2015 10:49:01 GMT -5
it's so sad letting go of hatred , what does joyous light really have to offer, each side of the coin has something to offer, something to suffer. ,there were some cliche lines & rhymes. but its honest and has something to say about personal growth
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Oct 24, 2015 23:26:58 GMT -5
It has taken me awhile to even click like on this one and it will be hard for most of us to comment on. I click like because the delivery is so well done but I can’t say I like the fact that you can write this. I just want to say that I feel this deeply and went through something similar a long time ago, though sometimes it still feels too recent.
Thanks for sharing,
LF
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Post by twistedangel on Oct 27, 2015 5:05:39 GMT -5
Love conquers all...maybe? Is far easier said than done. .but as Linkin Park sang...Let it go Nice
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Post by awesomebill on Dec 10, 2015 12:57:23 GMT -5
Get 'er done
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