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Post by twistedangel on Sept 18, 2015 2:33:05 GMT -5
gentle waves slap fibreglass a hollow sound...man made unlike living wooden hulls
weekend break...escape along with multitudes of others narrow waterways hobby sailor motorways
slow rocking in cabins cot drifting to dreamland
I scream to be alone
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Sept 18, 2015 20:29:09 GMT -5
That's what I like so much about backpacking, people hate walking. LOL I love the ending. It's almost a shock value piece. You don't need "along" in S2, L2.
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Post by Veritas on Sept 29, 2015 23:00:15 GMT -5
it would be awesome to see you dress as hitgirl for samhein , totally off topic. so you've boat experience? is that holiday in the isle? well painted, stands as is. LMS
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Post by Aish on Oct 12, 2015 15:03:27 GMT -5
Agree with LF's minor suggestion.
Excellent little piece, Angel. And the end is truly something I am feeling myself lately.
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