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Post by TwistedundeadAngel on Jul 15, 2015 2:18:11 GMT -5
Slowly slipping away Ever more suffocating world Encased in 0's an 1's cybernetic cage Digital mass control
Reach out into eternal ether try describe a scream Unto strangers who neither know nor care
Why?
I wish for silence Breathe air of an open plain No more zeros or ones but a world of two
Dear Google Dear Apple leave me privacy THE f*ck ALONE
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jul 15, 2015 17:26:51 GMT -5
Hi Undead Welcome to Dark Star. Please be sure to read our posting guidelines and… JK Good to see you Still haven’t figured out why you can’t log in? You should be able to set a new password so you can keep using your account; After a failed log in it comes up asking you to try again but this time under where you enter your password click on “Forgot your password?” Enter your username and click on “Recover.” It will then want you to answer a question to prove you are human. Enter the phrase you see in the window and click “submit.” Oh, I hate that word. ProBoards will send you an email to the address you provided when you signed up. You have one hour to click on the link in your email and set a new password. To me this seems like two poems divided at the word “Why?” yet together they have the effect of relating the moment of a profound realization. The first half reflects on a hunger for a community and reaching out for understanding. The “Why?” is a pivotal break in thought with the second half being the realization that ‘just we two’ is all you ever really wanted. I love that BTW. S1, L2 should read “An ever more suffocating world.” S2, L2 should either be; “describe a scream” (my personal preference) or, “try to describe a scream” I would delete “Unto” from S2, L3. Kudos for using the correct spelling with the use of the word “plain.” I still F that one up now and then. LOL
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jul 31, 2015 19:01:41 GMT -5
Claustrophobia
It’s too quiet The walls are closing in shadows stick to skin crickets make no sound but for the echos inside my braincase Stop squeezing them out
I miss a lot of people here lately but this little tease has become almost painful like a broken promise. Come back you sexy little she devil, we miss you.
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Post by twistedangel on Aug 7, 2015 12:51:39 GMT -5
In me defence I never actually went lol...I done somthing to me security settings on me tablet...which oddly sorted itself out after getting soaked in vodka and cranberry juice..an a night on top of a radiator Oh an FYI..if you expected me to have written anything new...you gonna be dissapointed, lost me poetical mojo..tho not surprising as it wos kinda small in the first place lol
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Aug 7, 2015 16:37:36 GMT -5
Nah, you don’t give yourself enough credit but show me a true poetic heart that does. You’re comments alone brighten up the place so don’t fret over it. Mojo comes and goes but it will be back. We are just glad you’re here. Vodka and cranberry juice has a habit of opening up all kinds of security locks as well as leading to a knight on the street radiator. LOL I’ve been struggling with my mojo too I finally come up with what I thought was good and original and just found out a couple days ago that it was inspired and plagiarized from a song I didn’t even realize I had listened to; “Surrender.” That’s all kinds of sucky but before that Surrender was a sort of failure at trying to write a love poem. I need to start smoking weed again. LOL
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