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Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 16, 2015 3:06:56 GMT -5
I want to be a raindrop I don’t mind falling and raindrops are never alone
It’s a dreadfully romantic idea that there can be only one
If you hold my hand a simple promise is all I can offer Is it enough Will the truth break me
She softly hides within her own thoughts I can only feel forgotten Am I the stranger now
Only one thing can melt the cold silence a kiss It's too late for me She is a raindrop
~Lonelyforsaken Inspired by When Five Fell
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Post by twistedangel on Feb 16, 2015 12:10:39 GMT -5
would it make a little more sense if S3 an S4 were swopped around ?
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 16, 2015 18:11:26 GMT -5
Yah, that was actually a last minute change I made as I threw it up late last night. I’ll switch them back. I also noticed an auto correct error and another change I want to make. Thanks for reading and commenting I’ve been so uninspired for so long that this is a bit of a plagiarized rip off from the video I gave credit to. The words are mostly the same bit the story is very different and not really related so…
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krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Feb 16, 2015 21:23:02 GMT -5
I love how it all came together with her being a rain drop now.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 18, 2015 15:03:45 GMT -5
I ran this through three different plagiarism checkers and it comes out 100% original. LOL
“When Five Fell” is a Youtube video by Wong Fu Productions. I really like their work. This one in particular I feel is very romantic and poetic. A lot of their work is but they can be very hilarious too.
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jmcc16
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Post by jmcc16 on Feb 18, 2015 21:16:07 GMT -5
There is something very profound about the idea of being a rain drop and knowing you will only exist as you fall to the earth headed for oblivion.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Feb 18, 2015 22:27:31 GMT -5
I’ve always loved rain and snow. I don’t know many people who admit that. I see metaphors in both of them all the time. The video struck me as profoundly poetic and gave me a moment of inspiration. I just wish I could have found some more originality to put into it. Wong Fu Productions is an exceptional team IMO. What first attracted me to their work was their comedy but I suspect there is more than one hopeless romantic on the team. Some of their videos are very valentine worthy.
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