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Post by windfog on Dec 11, 2014 13:46:18 GMT -5
A deserted street. Lamps yellow light. Shadows like the gates into the abyss. A beast listens to my steps Inside of an endless instant. - a stuffy friend's glance on my back -
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Dec 11, 2014 14:29:32 GMT -5
"A beast listens to my steps Inside of an endless instant." - I know that sound. The only change I would make a to rearrange the words of L2; “Shadows, like gates into the abyss.“ Awesome imagery Ris.
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Post by windfog on Dec 11, 2014 14:51:35 GMT -5
L.F. - you are right ... Sorry! W.F.
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Post by twistedangel on Dec 12, 2014 15:59:53 GMT -5
this gimme the creeps..like proper shivers...i been stalked before kinda reminded me of that so is a kinda odd thing to say i liked it
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Dec 12, 2014 17:43:38 GMT -5
The trick is to never think like or that you are a victim. I’ve never been stalked by a human, that I know of, but I have been sized up an openly attacked. I was stalked by a puma or two though, one that I’m sure of. It helps to be a big man and I’m never without at least a knife. It’s more difficult for women in a sea of predators. You have to think more and training would help. Many keep hidden daggers but you must know how, be able, and willing to use them. Thinking is your best weapon though. Don’t allow yourself to be put in the wrong situation. I have too much love for life to be a predator but that doesn’t mean I can’t turn the same attitude given on one. Nothing pisses me off more than one who wishes to impose their will on another or malice. It is an attempt to take away freedom of choice, the only freedom we have.
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