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Post by twistedangel on Dec 7, 2014 4:20:38 GMT -5
Sunset, sunrise How long have I waited Hours turn to eons Night eternal Unliving Existing
Dawns mocking chorus Morn's shadows embrace Vampyric slumber Long have I waited To jagged rocks chained
How foul a dragon's breath None can write a scream So tis with spiteful sword and bitter shield Defend my own dishonour
For how long have I waited for no one ever came
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Dec 7, 2014 4:46:48 GMT -5
I do love your short writes Your ending is a dagger in the heart. S1, L3 - ions should be eons. S1,L4 – Nights should be Night. This is a write worthy of your name (TwistedAngel) Awesome!
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Post by twistedangel on Dec 7, 2014 4:57:27 GMT -5
Oh crap lol always manage to F somthing up....fixed
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Post by windfog on Dec 7, 2014 7:46:22 GMT -5
Very vivid! Truth, truth, truth ... Great piece! W.F.
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