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Post by windfog on Oct 26, 2014 11:41:49 GMT -5
A stone, Wrapped in my bad mood, Broke the moon. - it's not voodoo, it is a pool -
03 - 06 - 2010 edited
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Oct 26, 2014 19:36:04 GMT -5
Ah, a reflective poem on reflection. Clever. Hmmm? Would make a nice Haiku.
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Post by Aish on Oct 27, 2014 11:10:20 GMT -5
Ris, the first three lines are divine. You don't need the fourth.
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Post by windfog on Oct 27, 2014 14:06:43 GMT -5
L.F. - thank you, sir!
Lady Aish - if you'll click on "distorted mirror" you'll see why I think I need this line.
W.F.
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Post by Aish on Oct 28, 2014 0:55:30 GMT -5
Ok
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krake
Crimson Soul
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Post by krake on Oct 28, 2014 20:22:08 GMT -5
My god this is so beautiful. So complex to be so simple. I'm lost now in thought. You've carried me away to that pool where I now sit and watch the ripples. Thank you.
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Post by krourya on Oct 29, 2014 13:06:00 GMT -5
quite deep actually
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