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Thirst
Oct 26, 2014 3:07:08 GMT -5
Post by untitled on Oct 26, 2014 3:07:08 GMT -5
Come to me All who are weary Search the glass I will make time pass
Men who lost Lost their mothers Their brothers Find comfort in no other
If I am an ocean Than sip from my bay Your mind I will blur To forget that day
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Post by windfog on Oct 26, 2014 11:35:44 GMT -5
Very good piece! W.F.
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Thirst
Oct 26, 2014 19:38:08 GMT -5
Post by LonelyForsaken on Oct 26, 2014 19:38:08 GMT -5
Hi Untitled and welcome to Dark Star. Nice first offering. I like drinking songs. I don’t normally encourage repetition but another “lost” in S2, L3 would solidify the rhythm nicely.
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