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Post by windfog on Oct 23, 2014 7:57:03 GMT -5
If after the end I'll get into heaven It would be, of course, Second hand. - five of seven are my life style -
19-01-2011 edited
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Post by Aish on Oct 23, 2014 10:23:26 GMT -5
Second hand heaven - is that like getting there after purgatory?
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Post by Bastet on Oct 23, 2014 13:34:56 GMT -5
Hi, Ris. Interesting little piece. I do not understand the final line though. What is living 5 and 7?
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Post by windfog on Oct 24, 2014 0:10:51 GMT -5
Hi, friends! Sorry ... Common notion is that there are 7 mortal sins. Though it can be more (Hinduism) or less (in our private life, Ha-ha!) Then, purgatory exists for those who are going to get first grade heaven. For those who are not going - second hand heaven ... Because hell is our mother country.
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Post by untitled on Oct 26, 2014 3:37:47 GMT -5
Confusing message but not that I get it, it's great!
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Post by untitled on Oct 26, 2014 3:38:35 GMT -5
maybe you can elaborate or mention the 7 mortal sins in the poem? just a suggestion
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Post by twistedangel on Oct 26, 2014 3:48:20 GMT -5
1 A proud look 2 A lying tongue 3 Hands that shed innocent blood 4 A heart that devises wicked plots 5 Feet that are swift to run into mischief 6 A deceitful witness that uttereth lies 7 Him that soweth discord among brethren ok so am willing to lie for anyone in court if anyone needs help...that way I can get the set
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Post by windfog on Oct 26, 2014 4:40:42 GMT -5
Hi! Mortal sins - easy. Wikipedia - search "mortal sin". In a poem it's, well, too big description.
Lady! I adore your sense of humour!
And, if somebody is interesting, just click on "distorted mirror" in a footprint - there there is an image of "Second-hand heaven". Best regards, W.F.
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Oct 26, 2014 19:34:49 GMT -5
Would that I had seen this early on. Second hand heaven is obviously hell to me. I like to think I would have connected 7 to the sins but but in all honesty it didn’t occur to me before reading your reply. Well written IMO.
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