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Post by twistedangel on Aug 13, 2014 3:50:16 GMT -5
Black varnish, chipped Once immaculate nail chewed Rough edges unfiled Hovering hesitantly thump over send Repelling poles
Digital words 0's an 1's dance thru the ether winding wirelessly to roost 21st century dovecote, Inbox
Once crafted letters of explanation now, terse texts Unremorseful unfeeling Wealth of emotion, chopped 5 words "I cant c u anymore"
Thumb strikes delete Its twin helps retype "Meet @8 need to talk" Delete again as his number calls Scruffy nailed thumb hits Ignore
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Aug 15, 2014 13:27:30 GMT -5
This one strikes me oddly. At first I didn’t know what to make of it, the message is sad and the rhythm is off, but S2 is very clever. Dovecote is an awesome word choice. "as his number calls" seems phone related instead of cyber. It’s thought provoking though and the more I thought about it the more I liked it.
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mee
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Post by mee on Aug 18, 2014 8:25:15 GMT -5
the easy heartless times of no face leaving and unseen eyes asking back , like this lots :_)
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