mee
Crimson Soul
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Post by mee on Jul 16, 2014 6:50:04 GMT -5
" LIES ALL LIES " said the little mice spies they're cutting off more than tails and ties they're cutting out organs they're making us ill nobody helps please tell me you will they've got us in cages got us hooked up we scream and scream please tell me you'll look
gave me baby cancer disected her eyes took out her heart before she died i want to go next i want to just die i got seven other babies please tell me you'll try
they've skinned us poisoned us tested our brains took the wires out when nothing remains crushed our bones to see how age with a human disease please tell me you'll change
covered us in growths that we can't lick clean tell me you'll stop this suffering please tell me there's an end to the wicked of man that this is not a part of a heavens big PLAN end this torture finish this death 7 babies 6 babies how many left 5 4 3 2 the last of my line PLEASE tell me you'll help can you do it in time tell me what we did to deserve this crime this whispering tumour says THE end is mine one BABY left to A HUMAN design
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Post by goldfinch on Jul 16, 2014 12:42:46 GMT -5
Disturbingly good.
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Post by twistedangel on Jul 18, 2014 0:24:57 GMT -5
it may not be the worlds best poem but wot I love about poems like this is how it makes you stop an think forcing readers to question IMO is the best kinda art brilliant sudject matter that been out of the spotlight for a long time now Animal Auschwitz..cruelty in the name of progress
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Jul 19, 2014 23:23:48 GMT -5
Thanks Mee I really enjoyed this. It even sprouted this little ditty between my ears.
Lies All lies No Karma no Dharma no humanity in men If we subsisted on kindness we’d all be Auschwitz thin
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Post by porcelain on Sept 12, 2014 0:50:56 GMT -5
-lets out a relieved sigh- I swear I was holding my breath while I read this. Wow...very disturbing and graphic. Gave me goosebumps. Good job (:
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