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Post by twistedangel on Mar 14, 2014 22:45:05 GMT -5
Wrote to escape me own sealed fate life in shitty shit city Crumbling concrete aint so pretty Nestled between closed down shops the crack den squats 60s built tower blocks young bois packin glocks
Explanations cos am sick an tired of justifications everywhere they tut an frown wankers who would look down The very same f*cks who condemn me happy to pay for a piece of me Extra to get me alone while they wives an kids are safley tucked up at home
But who really uses who?
I gotten of me chest a lot of crap in writing an yeah...I still enjoy fighting adrenaline rush so exciting cos the poor cant afford mountain climbing or scuba diving
Lap dancing an theiving add a little bit of dealing oh how I hear the 'decent' squealing hating the fact am barley existing
But now I find I shy away from me shit Partly said all I gotta say partly to escape me own everyday I'll always be seen as tarnished this dirt can never be washed away
I soldier on trying to move on hell is where I come from Writing for me now? I guess, pretending thers another place I can belong
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Apr 1, 2014 16:26:27 GMT -5
I like the end.
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Post by Bastet on Apr 5, 2014 22:50:22 GMT -5
"I'll always be seen as tarnished this dirt can never be washed away" think of it this way, beauty framed by suffering, or just you got life experience. Tarnish can be polished off. I like you.
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Post by twistedangel on Apr 6, 2014 4:13:30 GMT -5
LMAO..."I like the end." nuff said errm how to explain this one...kinda a trip down memory lane for meself trying to write in the style of how I started out with a twist at the end as to why I dont no longer TBH I really struggled to write this way again an even the result am not over happy with I guess maybe it should of gone in me own junk board cheers guys
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Post by LonelyForsaken on Apr 8, 2014 1:47:58 GMT -5
"I guess maybe it should of gone in me own junk board " - It's not that bad, just long with some bad rhyming. LOL But I get it. Some things just need to be said. Sorry about the short reply but I'm reverting to my old self and don't have much to give these days.
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