siksimon
Demon Disciple
Blind leading the blind.
Posts: 524
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Post by siksimon on Dec 15, 2013 16:06:23 GMT -5
12/15/2013 what about when it all just becomes too much you just cant drum the energy up you're feeling screwed up used up you're terrible at new stuff you want to give a f*ck but its like you're outta love but you've suffered enough you gotta get up feeling like you're stuck like you're f*cked up
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Post by twistedangel on Dec 16, 2013 17:44:27 GMT -5
i liked the apathy running thru this "you gotta get up feeling like you're stuck like you're f*cked up" the end i'd maybe change so somthing like "f*cked up gotta get up, carry on being stuck" <<kk far from perfect but is a loose idea
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suicideangel
Dark Initiate
What am i to do when the world turns dark and cold?
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Post by suicideangel on Feb 28, 2014 13:06:40 GMT -5
I love this post, it says so much in so little words. I bet there are a lot of us that feel this way.
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Post by awesomebill on Dec 8, 2015 15:43:17 GMT -5
12/15/2013 what about when it all just becomes too much you just cant drum the energy up you're feeling screwed up used up you're terrible at new stuff you want to give a f*ck but its like you're outta love but you've suffered enough you gotta get up feeling like you're stuck like you're f*cked upoh dear
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Post by Veritas on Dec 9, 2015 14:12:22 GMT -5
it is overly vague, in its description, lacking poetically... as it can be summed up in a single sentence or even a phrase, agree at times reality/the world, can feel overwhelming even be overwhelming... but its how a poet frames common knowledge
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Post by awesomebill on Dec 10, 2015 11:52:57 GMT -5
Thanks! I need to study now.
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Post by monapentacle666 on Feb 11, 2018 13:47:50 GMT -5
Deathly and hollow.
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LSD
Crimson Soul
She needs me, but I need her.
Posts: 102
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Post by LSD on Dec 2, 2018 11:26:36 GMT -5
raw and real
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sik
Dark Initiate
Posts: 61
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Post by sik on Feb 15, 2019 17:17:38 GMT -5
wow I come back and my stuff is still at the top of the list. Dafuq am I doing right?
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